Have you thought about gender equality? Normally this concept does not cross many minds as it has progressed over the years, but there are still problems regarding the workplace, social media, cat calling, harassment and more. We are all people, gender should not divide the way we treat each other. In the profession side of things, as the woman dominated occupations end up being lower paid than in men dominated occupations. Social media is also a problem because women are constantly sexualised, and put down causing depression, and negative body image. I hope that we can do better by making sure people are treated equally.
We are learning about persuasive writing, in this paragraph I used a rhetorical question and factual language.